Monday, November 16, 2009

For your dissection, upon the graced opinion that you might share?

Blue


Azure Sea of stillness


Cornflower dance in autumn golden hue


Turquoise left on a window edge


Sapphirine gaze locked embrace


Cobalt mood that lingers


Under thinning noonday sky


So well I know that colour


Blue

For your dissection, upon the graced opinion that you might share?
I know nothing of the mechanics of writing poetry but your words painted a most beautiful picture behind my eyes. K.L.S.
Reply:Very good very good indeed I enjoyed this poem very much I liked the self-imposed rules and it seems that it really follows your own rules and it seems very structured and yet it seems it doesn't take away from how much life is in this poem.
Reply:I like it! Very sweet, well done.
Reply:Very calming and lovely. I love it!


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